WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food veges. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll teddy bear and a soft toy  a soft unicorn. After that we went to the shop mall to buy some clothes, I got two new items staff and a pair of shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block  ice cream. Lucky me!

Rugby world cup 4 sentence recount

WALT:recount an event in just 4 sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup. Because the All Blacks won!!!

Saturn

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Success Criteria

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Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction
Use sentences and paragraphs
Use facts to inform the reader
Use different sentence starters
Use VCOP

Start writing here…
size

The size for saturn is 58,232 km and the rings for saturn THe size is 175,000 km for the rings on saturn.

Appearance

THE appearance for saturn is the rings and the rings are made ou of ice crystal and rocks.

Writing a ANZAC letter