WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food veges. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll teddy bear and a soft toy  a soft unicorn. After that we went to the shop mall to buy some clothes, I got two new items staff and a pair of shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block  ice cream. Lucky me!

Field trip on Google Expidition

In flox class we been working on this and we were looking a google expiditon and it was cool
and we went to other places like mars the moon a fearrest wheel and it was fantastic.

camp movie

This week we have been making some movie with imovie. we used it as a trailer.

Term 3 Sudent conferences

Camp Merc to long bay

Term3

This term i am looking forward to go to camp and learn many staff about camp with my friends.

How Earth was made

Saturn

Take a photo of your plan using an ipad and insert it here.

Success Criteria

Clear categories with subtitles	Self	LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction
Use sentences and paragraphs
Use facts to inform the reader
Use different sentence starters
Use VCOP

Start writing here…
size

The size for saturn is 58,232 km and the rings for saturn THe size is 175,000 km for the rings on saturn.

Appearance

THE appearance for saturn is the rings and the rings are made ou of ice crystal and rocks.

My name in New Zealand sign language.

This week we have been learning some sign language in Flox class. This is the link to my name in nzsl.


Can you sign your name?

intresting facts

Hi my name is mark and this an audio recording about me.


https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6JRSRf38rMVWkdDUFRMbmZuREE&authuser=0



I like you to use the voice recorder because the voice recorder so when i forget some thing it can say it for me.

Writing a ANZAC letter

All about me

Today is a day I have started my blog! check out All about me image.